Posted by: Sarah Bedwell | November 13, 2012

Bloody Mary

By Keeley Stephenson

Annabel shivered as she sat in the moldy taxi. The driver mumbled “dead” she screamed “aghhhhhh” A scarf wrapped itself around her mouth and she could barely breathe. Blood started to drip from the car roof. She climbed out of the window and ran as fast as she could but he was followed her all the way home.

She got home and found nothing but a note saying “I can c u” she cried and stayed in her room till midnight. She went to the bathroom mirror and said bloody Mary 3 times. The lights went out and the door locked and someone appeared behind her. It was bloody Mary, all of  a sudden she disappeared with bloody mary!

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  1. Year 6 above the Roof-
    We thought your story was good. We were scared. By the way, do you think you can summon Bloody Mary in this way?

    • well bloody mary is a white ghost lady who died in a grave because some of her friends pushed her in and she died there in the night and every time someone says bloody mary x3 in the mirror she returns for 1 hole night and day she haunts you xx

  2. this sounds really cool

  3. that is a really awesome story

  4. hello it chloe w fron rhyddings you story was good

  5. Thats a really good story keeley.iwanted to read more what happened next

  6. this is a really good story keeley!

  7. this is a scary story it freaked me out!!

  8. *shiver* It reminds me of a story I read about a man with no face.

  9. That is so creepy! If you ever want to see my blog just go to this link:

    http://kidblog.org/EmilyRothsClass/author/d1806986-fcd1-4431-a347-9f64eb09a1bc/


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